Solid video, as it seems youve only been making rebuilds vids for the last few months. There were a couple of issues I noticed. The biggest is that this realistic/dynasty video felt more like a fantasy/quick rebuild video. Instead of 2 years, stretch it out to 5 years in a 30ish minute video. Most of the video was a focus on stats, but since this is not a multi episode series it doesnt add to the narrative much. What should have taken more screen time is you theory crafting the Lauri trade as it was essentially the biggest event. I would also recommend that before simming you show the schedule & you clicking sim to date, as it can be jarring to cut from discussing trading for a pivotal piece straight into the final record for the season. I Love rebuild videos, keep at it.
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Solid video, as it seems youve only been making rebuilds vids for the last few months. There were a couple of issues I noticed. The biggest is that this realistic/dynasty video felt more like a fantasy/quick rebuild video. Instead of 2 years, stretch it out to 5 years in a 30ish minute video. Most of the video was a focus on stats, but since this is not a multi episode series it doesnt add to the narrative much. What should have taken more screen time is you theory crafting the Lauri trade as it was essentially the biggest event. I would also recommend that before simming you show the schedule & you clicking sim to date, as it can be jarring to cut from discussing trading for a pivotal piece straight into the final record for the season. I Love rebuild videos, keep at it.
This would be greatest thing ever sweeping suns then warriors, just imagine
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