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Hey, rocket fans, I was inspired by the rockets rebuild and made a video on it! Give it a watch and let me know what you think
Would love feedback on the video! Specifically, let me know what aspects you think were strong, and where you believe there is room for improvement. Thank you!
by Shadyo
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Pretty good content. I think your grasp of the Rockets situation is accurate, excluding your Amen Thompson take. It’s just way too early to even talk about him, let alone crown him a “true point guard”. Every other player you mentioned though is accurately summed up either in terms of current play or potential.
This content is aimed at a really small audience, which is people interested in a “State of the Rockets” video but that aren’t Rockets fans. There’s nothing new here for Rockets fans, hence no mental engagement. The content is true and your opinion is sound it’s just not really for anyone. That being said, I think you should keep making content bc you did a lot of stuff good.
I liked the writing, the clips were alright, the editing was not offensive. Maybe slow your narration when making a big point or joke. Maybe research narrative pacing. Overall I’m nitpicking bc the video was respectable enough, you don’t need compliments or a pat on the back.
I’m here for the Rockets/Pistons shitshow rivalry, would love more of that in the future. That’s a good example to me of fresh aspects to engage a Rockets fan.
I suggest studying [Brett Kollmann](https://youtu.be/k7dz_a5JMag?si=r6yfSJDXlmuu56CA), especially his pacing and inflection. His focus is more Xs and Os but I think you could learn a lot from just studying his video production.
Thanks for the Rockets content and hope that helps.