hi guys I had to write an article on the rockets for college and would appreciate any feedback:
[https://britishbballl.blogspot.com/2023/10/the-houston-rockets-team-to-watch.html](https://britishbballl.blogspot.com/2023/10/the-houston-rockets-team-to-watch.html)
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by Valuable-Theory-5881
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reads like chatGPT wrote it. Also outdated.
It was a good read. The only error was mentioning KJ Martin like he was still on the team and you could have tied in some of KPJ drama, but good job.
To be perfectly honest, it reads like it could have been written last year or the year before. You should mention some of the new talent we drafted and acquired in free agency. Also name the new coach by name with explanation of his previous prestige as leading a team to the Finals in his first full year as a Head Coach.